an addendum

[wook77]

An Addendum to my WTF list -

I just read a story that used the euphemism "Meat Stick" in all seriousness.

I was immediately kicked out of the sexy sultry BDSM mood and went straight to giggles (Did not pass Go, did not collect 200 dollars).

Anyone else have a word/phrase/saying that makes them go WTF?! and ruins the story?

Comments

[inmyth.livejournal.com]

It's so friggin out of character. God I'm not exaggerating...it just hurts. Ok so maybe a bit *shifty glance*.

No seriously, we have like hooker-and-loving-it!Harry with (I think cos I haven't read far enough) trying-to-be-suave-and-oh-so-off-canon!Draco.

Hand me a spoon will you?

Can you get other people to read it? Considering it's anonymous?

[wook77.livejournal.com]

well, it was eventually posted publically so others could read it.

if you want to email it to me, I'll slug my way through it for ya...

it sounds crackalicious. Just keep thinking it's a joke and make sarcastic comments about each thing and you'll get through it... that's where the hp_splodey came from. wilde and I were slugging through a fic and were OMG THIS IS AWFUL and once we started mocking, it became easier.

[inmyth.livejournal.com]

*grins*...yeah someone did tell me to do a MST out it.

Sending it.