Fic: Dusk - Seamus/Dean for [livejournal.com profile] chaeldub

May. 22nd, 2006 03:28 pm
wook77: (Deamus)
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Title: Dusk
Author: [livejournal.com profile] wook77
Pairing: Dean/Seamus with a voyeur!Harry
Wordcount: 343
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: voyeuristic!Harry
Summary: Shocked, intrigued, repulsed, attracted, Harry stared at the sight in front of him.
A/N: Written for [livejournal.com profile] chaeldub's prompt of Deamus with Harry watching. I hope this fits the bill. Also, not a drabble but not really a ficlet either. Finally - unbeta'd as I wrote this during driving school on Saturday.



Shocked, intrigued, repulsed, attracted, Harry stared at the sight in front of him. He hadn't ever considered this. Well, he had but not really, not seriously. They were his mates and he didn't know.

He'd tumbled out of the Floo a minute ago. When the flat echoed his greeting back at him, Harry hadn't really questioned. Instead, he'd started down the hall.

The door to Dean's bedroom was closed but there were muted noises coming from behind it. The bitten off cry had his heart racing and, in a controlled panic, he threw the door open.

Without taking his eyes away from the sight in front of him, he grabbed the door inches from it slamming into the wall. There, in front of him, Dean was wrapped around Seamus, his chest to Seamus' back.

In the murky light of a sunset in London being filtered through dingy curtains as they stirred in the breeze, the contrast of their skin tones weren't nearly as obvious as during the day. Instead, they blended, one into the other.

"Dean." The breathy moan had Harry's cock stirring in his trousers and Harry felt shame. He was watching two of his best friends fucking, and no, that word was wrong. Even Harry could tell that there was something more than just the physical between them as Seamus moaned and Dean stroked a hand down Seamus' cheek softly even as he continued to thrust harshly.

Harry had suspected but hadn't taken those suspicions seriously. He'd seen the furtive glances, the quick touches, a finger on the lips, a stray lock brushed off the forehead. He'd thought it merely the deep friendship that had spanned fifteen years, a war and countless losses.

As Dean thrust hard, Seamus bit back another cry. Harry's cock hardened completely and, completely mortified, he closed the door and fled to his bedroom.

The image of the two of them would stay with him but it was dirty, wrong to want, to respond to that. They were his friends and, as his hand frantically undid his trousers, he bit back his own cry.



As always - your thoughts and concrit always welcomed with open arms.

Date: 2006-05-22 11:38 pm (UTC)
ext_67624: (cherry lips)
From: [identity profile] acidpop25.livejournal.com
*dead* VERY nice.

Date: 2006-05-23 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
Thanks! As always, I'm glad you liked!

*hugs*

Date: 2006-05-23 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yodels.livejournal.com
Very nice. Driving school you say? What do they teach there?

Date: 2006-05-23 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
Thanks!

Um, they taught us absolutely nothing, actually. It was 5.5 hours of hell and drudgery. I wasn't even allowed to write (I wrote this right as class started and the teacher dude started his "no other activities" lecture).

Date: 2006-05-23 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irrevokable.livejournal.com
Oh buddy, that was some major hotness. And I am amazed you wrote this during driving class. Should have showed it to the cowboy on crutches. Maybe that would have shut him up.

Date: 2006-05-23 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you liked and schtuff! YAYES!

It was actually as class started but yeah... it was fairly nice. I was also working on some dialogue in my head for something else.

I bet he would have passed out. That would have been worth it.

(the icon is for the cowboy)

Date: 2006-05-23 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaeldub.livejournal.com
♥ You own me right now. ♥

The short, sharp structure keeps picking up pace, like Harry's heart. I can so see him standing there in the doorway, the room sort of hazy.

The end though, ♥ to the power of infinity, the end is just perfect. You took my five little words and made them so real.

The image of the two of them would stay with him but it was dirty, wrong to want, to respond to that. They were his friends and, as his hand frantically undid his trousers, he bit back his own cry. That image is pure spun gold and i'm gonna have it stuck in my head for days... yay.

Of course you realise the more deamus/harry you write the more I fan-boy you. Have I said this rawks, no, ok, this RAWKS. Thankyouthankyouthankyou*Harry's hand in trousers, image of deamus*thankyouthankyouthankyou*oh my*thankyou.....

Date: 2006-05-23 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
Really? *blushes* Wow. This is just an amazing review.

You know I love you, right?

I'm glad you liked the pacing and stuffs. I couldn't fit this into a drabble. It wouldn't let me. That image you mention is really where the fic started for me. I wrote that line and then fit the rest of the story.

I'm getting fanboyed? OMGYAYES!!!!

Date: 2006-05-24 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaeldub.livejournal.com
I've been writing a few drabbles recently for AWDT and i'm amazed at what can come out of my head with only a few words in a prompt. So when you took my little nudge and turned it into this ♥ Also after the last little Deamus you wrote I had to prod you for more and then I find out you've gone and joined 100quills and this is your pairing...*dances*...

Yes much fan-boying will ensue

Date: 2006-05-23 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bouncy.livejournal.com
Bloody hell!

No words!!!! *incoherent*

Date: 2006-05-23 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
YAYES for incoherency (or however you spell that)!

I'm glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2006-05-23 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] why-me-why-not.livejournal.com
oh, i love it!

In the murky light of a sunset in London being filtered through dingy curtains as they stirred in the breeze, the contrast of their skin tones weren't nearly as obvious as during the day. Instead, they blended, one into the other. <-- Fan-fucking-tastic imagery!

The image of the two of them would stay with him but it was dirty, wrong to want, to respond to that. They were his friends and, as his hand frantically undid his trousers, he bit back his own cry. <-- very powerful lines there, especially w/ Harry's conflicting emotions.

How are you, wook? I haven't talked to you in a while -- way too long, I think! I miss my wookie-friend!! I hope things are going okay? *squishes you*

Date: 2006-05-23 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
That first bit is my favorite line and the second one is my second fave.

I'm well... spazzy but well... I'll tell you about it next time we're on YIM together...

Date: 2006-05-23 11:15 am (UTC)
mordyn4: (Default)
From: [personal profile] mordyn4
I've never read a fic that didn't involve Harry or Draco in the pairing, and this is the fouth one that wasn't H/D. And I fucking loved it!!! ZOMG, write more!!!! M.

Date: 2006-05-23 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
Oh I totally plan on it. I signed up for Deamus for [livejournal.com profile] 100quills so expect plenty more deamus from me. This is my brand new favorite pairing right now.

I've corrupted another one *dances*... err, I mean, welcome to the Deamus love.

Date: 2006-05-23 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] best-of-five.livejournal.com
oooh, nicely done! see, i'm glad you posted it. and all the schtuffs in the comment trail made me a happy camper :D

Date: 2006-05-23 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! (You know what I think about your comments and schtuffs...)

Date: 2006-05-23 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
♥ You know... I hardly ever read dean/seamus... maybe I should.

Date: 2006-05-23 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wearethestars.livejournal.com
And that was totally me.

Date: 2006-05-23 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
snirt.

I'm glad you liked it and if you want a list of rec's I have a ton to give you...

Date: 2006-05-23 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wearethestars.livejournal.com
Send them on.

Date: 2006-05-24 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaeldub.livejournal.com
Wook rocks...

I is in love with this drabble...

I'm in love with Deamus...

Although for some reason I keep writing Seamus with Theodore *raises eyebrow* but i'm trying for a deamus fic soon :D

Date: 2006-05-24 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rizzyr.livejournal.com
Gah!!! That was goygeous!! I love reading Deamus fics from people I've never read before. Have you written more than this? *raises eyebrow*

Date: 2006-05-26 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I am so sorry not to have responded before this. *smites lj for not sending notices*

Thanks! I have written one other piece so far, well, it's kind of deamus. It's more UST. It was for a prompt at [livejournal.com profile] switchandfic and you can find it HERE (http://community.livejournal.com/switchandfic/2089.html#cutid1).

This is my new favorite pairing so I'll be writing a fair amount of it in the future!

Date: 2006-05-24 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sugareey.livejournal.com
Yes, yes...and word. The end. =)

Date: 2006-05-26 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I happen to be writing something about camping, btw...

Date: 2006-05-29 07:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cinnamon-sins.livejournal.com
GUH! Oh, God....GUH!

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