First time writing Monaboyd...
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anael requested comment porn. As I've not been able to write a decent sex scene in about a month... I wrote something not very porny but here it is anyway.
My first toe-dip into Monaboyd. All concrit will be gracefully accepted.
One last time... this is RPS - Billy Boyd/Dominic Monaghan... I don't know these people and I mean no harm to them with this. It's only my own pervy fantasies and, really, this isn't very pervy anyway.
Quiet moments, like right now with his head pillowed on a shoulder, were his favourites. He enjoyed the feather-light drift of fingers down his back, so subtle he might think they were his t-shirt moving in the wake of the fan but he knew that it wasn't.
These were the moments that Billy cherished the most. Dom, when awake, was larger than life. Constantly in motion, taking the piss faster than Billy could think at times, Dom kept Billy on his toes and he appreciated it. He did, truly, but he also cherished these moments when Dom would brush his fingertips down his back or across his arm, walking so lightly. "Bug kisses" he'd call it and Billy smiled as he remembered.
Dom must have felt his face change with the smile because the light touches stopped and Billy shifted, as if he were just waking. When Billy opened his eyes, Dom's face was so very close. For a moment, Billy wanted to lean in that hairs-breadth and touch, lip to lip. That would be a brilliant way to start the morning and wasn't that a shock? He'd never had these sorts of feelings for another bloke but Dom… Dom was Dom, really. That's all there was to those feelings. Dom was more than a gender or even sex. Dom was a bit like whisky, water-of-life.
As Billy compared Dom to whisky and life, the moment of eye contact stretched on, breath puffing from one set of lips to the other.
It would be a tip of the chin for the lips to touch.
It would be one tiny little gesture, an inch or two separating them.
It might as well have been a chasm. That inch held the difference between remaining mates, best mates, and becoming more.
The moment continued, eyes staring unblinking at one another and Billy's eyes ached to blink, to restore a bit of moisture but then, the moment… and Dom blinked. Billy quickly followed suit. The press of lips against his sent his eyelids flying open again.
For all those long mornings spent staring, those moments that stretched to infinity and beyond, in the blink of an eye, they became more.
anael requested comment porn. As I've not been able to write a decent sex scene in about a month... I wrote something not very porny but here it is anyway.My first toe-dip into Monaboyd. All concrit will be gracefully accepted.
One last time... this is RPS - Billy Boyd/Dominic Monaghan... I don't know these people and I mean no harm to them with this. It's only my own pervy fantasies and, really, this isn't very pervy anyway.
Quiet moments, like right now with his head pillowed on a shoulder, were his favourites. He enjoyed the feather-light drift of fingers down his back, so subtle he might think they were his t-shirt moving in the wake of the fan but he knew that it wasn't.
These were the moments that Billy cherished the most. Dom, when awake, was larger than life. Constantly in motion, taking the piss faster than Billy could think at times, Dom kept Billy on his toes and he appreciated it. He did, truly, but he also cherished these moments when Dom would brush his fingertips down his back or across his arm, walking so lightly. "Bug kisses" he'd call it and Billy smiled as he remembered.
Dom must have felt his face change with the smile because the light touches stopped and Billy shifted, as if he were just waking. When Billy opened his eyes, Dom's face was so very close. For a moment, Billy wanted to lean in that hairs-breadth and touch, lip to lip. That would be a brilliant way to start the morning and wasn't that a shock? He'd never had these sorts of feelings for another bloke but Dom… Dom was Dom, really. That's all there was to those feelings. Dom was more than a gender or even sex. Dom was a bit like whisky, water-of-life.
As Billy compared Dom to whisky and life, the moment of eye contact stretched on, breath puffing from one set of lips to the other.
It would be a tip of the chin for the lips to touch.
It would be one tiny little gesture, an inch or two separating them.
It might as well have been a chasm. That inch held the difference between remaining mates, best mates, and becoming more.
The moment continued, eyes staring unblinking at one another and Billy's eyes ached to blink, to restore a bit of moisture but then, the moment… and Dom blinked. Billy quickly followed suit. The press of lips against his sent his eyelids flying open again.
For all those long mornings spent staring, those moments that stretched to infinity and beyond, in the blink of an eye, they became more.
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Date: 2006-09-01 11:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-09-02 04:10 am (UTC)♥ you!
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Date: 2006-09-02 12:29 am (UTC)... Ok so don't do that. I may well die if you do.
But Damn, Wook! You're too good. ♥♥
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Date: 2006-09-02 12:30 am (UTC)Premature enter indeed.
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Date: 2006-09-02 04:11 am (UTC)btw - if you can even get one part of one of your slashfest fics done, then I won't have to ban you from the next time of making requests... so if you can at least work on one of htem...
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Date: 2006-09-02 09:19 am (UTC)OK. I Will try, just for you.
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Date: 2006-09-02 05:26 pm (UTC)OH SHIT.
I can't believe you wrote them! YAY! I've only been waiting since forever. This was amazing, Wook. Seriously, I love Billy's thoughts and the bug kisses and Dom being larger than life. Just how I picture them, except probably with less clothes.
I mean, what?
BRILLIANT. ♥ ALL OVER YOU TIMES INFINITY.
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Date: 2006-09-03 05:27 am (UTC)less clothes will come when my smut muse comes back. I wrote a sex scene today and it really read like a clinical description. It was painfully awful and worse than my most recent hd365.
You know I love you so very much as well!
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Date: 2006-09-03 04:01 am (UTC)Ohh, and randomly? What kind of songs/music are on your Colati Mix?
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Date: 2006-09-03 05:32 am (UTC)um, on the colati mix are the following... (and I can't upload right now as I'm at home with shitty dial-up)
Iris - Goo Goo Dolls
Kiss you - Iio
Crazy - The Kooks
When a Man Loves a Woman - Gedeon McKinney
Have you ever really loved a woman - Chris Daughtry
I Know you By Heart - Eva Cassidy
Chasing Cars - Snow Patrol
Everything - Lifehouse
I Will Follow You into the Dark - Death Cab for Cutie
With or Without You - U2
and a bunch of songs that I haven't switched off my thumb drive so they're not showing up.
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Date: 2006-09-03 05:34 am (UTC)I have some of those songs and I can find the rest, I was just curious as to what kind of music you had on there since I've kinda had colati on the brain. I'm writing it in between the bits of original fic that keep taking over and the SPN I'm trying to rush-finish before the new season.
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Date: 2006-09-05 05:51 pm (UTC)Hands Down - Dashboard Confessional
Make Damn Sure - Taking Back Sunday
Us - She Wants Revenge
The Kill - 30 Seconds to Mars
Call and Return - hellogoodbye
Love is Blindness - U2
I'll Hold You In My Heart - Elvis Presley
Such Great Heights - Iron and Wine
Nice on the writing! and I'll prolly have something sometime next week for you... multi-part not-really happy ending monaboyd.
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Date: 2006-09-05 06:28 pm (UTC)It rained nearly all weekend which meant we were lazy and laid around a lot and I got a lot of writing done actually, so I'm excited! *g*
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Date: 2006-09-05 06:31 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-09-05 06:51 pm (UTC)Us (http://www.sendspace.com/file/zyrsxr) by She Wants Revenge (it's a .wma file though)
Love is Blindness (http://www.sendspace.com/file/g8gy0j) by U2
Call and Return (http://www.sendspace.com/file/fe48hy) by hellogoodbye
The Kill (http://www.sendspace.com/file/z1ol54) by 30 Seconds to Mars
Make Damn Sure (http://www.sendspace.com/file/4nkdm3) by Taking Back Sunday
Hands Down (http://www.sendspace.com/file/p09ev6) Dashboard Confessional.
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Date: 2006-09-05 07:51 pm (UTC)