Verbose is a sin I am guilty of. Thankfully, my betas kick my ass and tell me so.
YES! Detailed kissing is the absolute best. kaalee has this kissing video that just does it for me - it's just two men kissing and god is it fucking hot. I don't need anything else in a story - just give me kissing and I'm more than happy :D
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Date: 2008-04-25 06:54 am (UTC)YES! Detailed kissing is the absolute best.