My eyes almost popped out of my head when I saw that second "pairing." ;-)
Horny fangirling aside, I really enjoyed this -- your Seamus voice especially. (I giggled a little at the moment where he's mentally yelling at his cock.) The dialogue was very natural, and the alley scene was just right for their first time.
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Date: 2007-10-17 12:55 am (UTC)Horny fangirling aside, I really enjoyed this -- your Seamus voice especially. (I giggled a little at the moment where he's mentally yelling at his cock.) The dialogue was very natural, and the alley scene was just right for their first time.