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slythindor100 challenge # 10
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wook77Ok, my first ficlet for slythindor100. It is for challenge 10 (remix a ficlet from an earlier challenge).
Title: Tasty (the sequel)
Wordcount: 491 (I just squeaked it in)
Pairing: H/D
Rating: R
Summary: Harry has always wanted to lick that eyebrow. Now's his chance.
A/N: Based on![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
star_dancer54's ficlet Tasty, which was written for challenge #6.
“Are you or aren’t you?” Harry, for the past fifteen minutes, had been staring at that thin black bar sticking out of Draco’s eyebrow.
“Am I or aren’t I going to what, Draco?” The snort of laughter that responded didn’t help Harry figure out what Draco was saying.
“Lick my eyebrow, that was your pick up line, wasn’t it?” Harry’s mouth dropped as it made an “O” of surprise.
“I…err…well, that is… what?” Another burst of laughter and Harry blushed crimson.
“You’ve been staring at my eyebrow since we’ve been here.” Harry almost groaned as Draco waggled that eyebrow at him. When Draco leaned in closer, the groan burst free.
“Are you or aren’t you?” Harry leaned forward and ghosted his tongue across the bar. The hairs prickled slightly as he brushed past them. The metal was warm against his tongue. Braver now that Draco hadn’t hexed him for his audacity, Harry curled his tongue and licked again, much harder this time. Before Harry could react, Draco tipped his head back and met Harry’s tongue with his lips, sucking it in deep. The suction pulling his tongue out of his mouth made Harry moan as he tried to tug it back. Lips pressed hard against the others, Harry pushed his hands deep into Draco’s hair as the pair kissed. Air didn’t seem too important as Harry felt Draco’s hands jerk his shirt out of his pants. The whispered touch across his back finally broke their mouths apart as Harry tossed his head back and moaned out Draco’s name.
Harry pushed Draco backwards until he was lying almost completely on top of the now green-haired man. Draco’s head thrust upwards to catch Harry’s bottom lip with his teeth. It was deliciously painful as Harry allowed the weight of Draco’s head to bring them both down onto the couch. In addition to the sharp pain of those teeth, Draco’s hands were rougher as they grabbed at Harry’s arse.
Heeding the call, Harry pressed down firmly as he broke the kiss to lick at where Draco’s shirt gaped at the collarbone.
“Are you part cat?” The question seemed incongruous with the current activities and caused Harry to gape.
“What the hell are you on about, Draco?”
“You are obsessed with licking, Potter.” Draco gestured towards where Harry was currently laving his chest before resuming his grip on Harry’s arse.
“I like the taste of you.” Harry gave a lick as he undid the rest of the shirt. His eyes bugged when he saw the small silver bars set into Draco’s nipples. He quickly dropped his head to capture the right one between his teeth and tugged. A gasping moan answered him. “Besides, I think you like me tasting you.” Harry mumbled around the metal in his mouth.
When Draco grabbed a fistful of Harry’s hair, all Harry could think was that it might have been an accidental and shoddy pick-up line but it worked.
I haven't forgotten my challenge responses... I'm almost done with the next two sets. I shall separate the H/D goodness from the SW goodness.
slythindor100. It is for challenge 10 (remix a ficlet from an earlier challenge).Title: Tasty (the sequel)
Wordcount: 491 (I just squeaked it in)
Pairing: H/D
Rating: R
Summary: Harry has always wanted to lick that eyebrow. Now's his chance.
A/N: Based on
star_dancer54's ficlet Tasty, which was written for challenge #6.“Are you or aren’t you?” Harry, for the past fifteen minutes, had been staring at that thin black bar sticking out of Draco’s eyebrow.
“Am I or aren’t I going to what, Draco?” The snort of laughter that responded didn’t help Harry figure out what Draco was saying.
“Lick my eyebrow, that was your pick up line, wasn’t it?” Harry’s mouth dropped as it made an “O” of surprise.
“I…err…well, that is… what?” Another burst of laughter and Harry blushed crimson.
“You’ve been staring at my eyebrow since we’ve been here.” Harry almost groaned as Draco waggled that eyebrow at him. When Draco leaned in closer, the groan burst free.
“Are you or aren’t you?” Harry leaned forward and ghosted his tongue across the bar. The hairs prickled slightly as he brushed past them. The metal was warm against his tongue. Braver now that Draco hadn’t hexed him for his audacity, Harry curled his tongue and licked again, much harder this time. Before Harry could react, Draco tipped his head back and met Harry’s tongue with his lips, sucking it in deep. The suction pulling his tongue out of his mouth made Harry moan as he tried to tug it back. Lips pressed hard against the others, Harry pushed his hands deep into Draco’s hair as the pair kissed. Air didn’t seem too important as Harry felt Draco’s hands jerk his shirt out of his pants. The whispered touch across his back finally broke their mouths apart as Harry tossed his head back and moaned out Draco’s name.
Harry pushed Draco backwards until he was lying almost completely on top of the now green-haired man. Draco’s head thrust upwards to catch Harry’s bottom lip with his teeth. It was deliciously painful as Harry allowed the weight of Draco’s head to bring them both down onto the couch. In addition to the sharp pain of those teeth, Draco’s hands were rougher as they grabbed at Harry’s arse.
Heeding the call, Harry pressed down firmly as he broke the kiss to lick at where Draco’s shirt gaped at the collarbone.
“Are you part cat?” The question seemed incongruous with the current activities and caused Harry to gape.
“What the hell are you on about, Draco?”
“You are obsessed with licking, Potter.” Draco gestured towards where Harry was currently laving his chest before resuming his grip on Harry’s arse.
“I like the taste of you.” Harry gave a lick as he undid the rest of the shirt. His eyes bugged when he saw the small silver bars set into Draco’s nipples. He quickly dropped his head to capture the right one between his teeth and tugged. A gasping moan answered him. “Besides, I think you like me tasting you.” Harry mumbled around the metal in his mouth.
When Draco grabbed a fistful of Harry’s hair, all Harry could think was that it might have been an accidental and shoddy pick-up line but it worked.
I haven't forgotten my challenge responses... I'm almost done with the next two sets. I shall separate the H/D goodness from the SW goodness.
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Date: 2005-12-01 04:37 am (UTC)I like the fact that Malfoy is still prat!Malfoy, instead of going aroung being lovable and stuff, and Harry's unconfident and cute. Great!
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Date: 2005-12-01 03:49 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed!!!