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More responses to the prompts I requested... All are H/D.

As always, commentary and concrit welcomed with open arms.




Title: The Spinner’s Mix: How nice a dame
Author: [livejournal.com profile] wook77
Wordcount: 874
Pairing: Harry/?Stranger?
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Harry goes to the Spinner’s Mix. While there, he meets a stranger. It didn’t matter who it was, he wanted to feel, to just be.
A/N: for [livejournal.com profile] luciology’s prompt of H/D - A club, with "Luck be a lady tonight". Semi-songfic because I use lyrics from Luck be a Lady Tonight from Guys and Dolls. (shudders to even type the previous. Gah, I wrote a songfic, I’m such a poser.)



The Spinner’s Mix was a wizarding club with a DJ that remixed songs from both the Muggle world and the Wizarding one. It was located in a hybrid part of town, half-Muggle and half-Wizard. Since the area was so mixed, the inhabitants were used to the odd dress and mannerisms of the visiting wizards and witches.

The line in front of the club snaked around the building. Thankfully, being the Slayer-of-He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named, all Harry had to do to gain entrance was to flash his id to the bouncer. The line groaned as Harry slipped into the club.

The music was pounding and there were countless bodies gyrating on the dance floor. Lights flashed overhead, strobe lights interspersed with colored lights swirling throughout the dance floor. There were fairy lights that floated around and followed people for a time.

Harry paused after entering and surveyed the club. There were two stories, the top one where he stood now and the dance floor. Across the room, the DJ stood, spinning the music that drove the frenzy down below.

Smiling to himself, Harry pushed his way through the throng of people until he reached the bar. Shouting over the noise, he quickly ordered a Humdinger, a mixed drink only available at the Spinner’s Mix. Drink in hand, he made a circuit of the top floor, nodding to the few people he knew. George Weasley and Lee Jordan stood close together and after a brief wave, Harry moved past.

Sitting his drink down on an empty table, he proceeded down the steps to lose himself in the music. The beat was so loud that Harry felt his pants vibrating against his shins. The song was heavy and almost hypnotic in its beat. Soon, he found himself pushing and grinding with the rest of the bodies.

A set of hands settled on his waist again and he pushed back against them. He felt an answering thrust and the pair moved in time with each other. It didn’t matter who it was, he wanted to feel, to just be. Harry felt the erection behind him and knew it was a man that grabbed him. From the feel of the body, the man was slender. Leaning his head back, he rested on the shoulder as they danced.

As Harry pushed back against the man behind him, the rest of the dance floor receded until it was a blur of color, moving in time to the music. The world centered on the two bodies, of the feel of the stranger’s hands pulling him closer, chest to back. Those tempting hands rubbed and stroked Harry’s chest and stomach. A groan escaped his lips as the stranger pushed his fingertips into the waistband of Harry’s pants.

“Do you want to take this somewhere else?” The man asked in a low drawl as they continued to grind against one another. Harry only nodded.

Hands still pushed into Harry’s waistband, the stranger guided Harry until they reached a private room. It was dark, so dark that Harry couldn’t see who the other person was as he twisted around to kiss. The brief light from the doorway illuminated blond hair, his favorite, before the stranger kicked it shut.

Mouths touched and pushed and thrust as they battled. The need roared to life within Harry as he quickly pulled off the t-shirt the stranger wore. Another tug and the belt was quickly undone. Plunging his hands into the barely undone trousers, Harry rubbed the erection in his hands.

He quickly sank to his knees and before the stranger could react, engulfed the cock in his mouth. The moan emitted by the stranger was well worth the control it took to suppress his gag reflex as he sucked, up and down, on the prick. Rubbing his one hand at the base as he sucked and licked, Harry rubbed his fingers over the man’s arse. He trailed his fingers across the pucker and back up to semi-painfully clench those cheeks.

“Enough.” That drawl again and Harry was pulled off the cock with a pop. Crashing their lips together, the stranger undid Harry’s belt and buttons, driving his hand into Harry’s pants as he lowered the zipper.

“Harder.” Harry breathed out as the man grabbed his erection. With rough, fierce movements, the stranger brought Harry to the brink. When the man held both their pricks together and continued to tug and rub, Harry couldn’t hold on any longer and came. Reaching out, he held the other man’s erection until he, too, came.

Pushing their hands together, Harry mixed their seed together and then brought a finger to the lips of the man. Sucking in one of Harry’s fingers, the man lifted his own hand to Harry’s lips. Grinning, he sucked it in and cleaned it with his tongue.

When their hands were clean, the stranger started redressing Harry.

“Luck be a lady tonight, eh?” Harry laughed at the line from his current partner.

“I’m no lady.” The stranger laughed at Harry’s statement.

“But luck let me see how nice a ‘dame’ you are.”

“A lady wouldn’t flirt with strangers, she’d have a heart, she’d have a soul, A lady wouldn't make little snake eyes at you.” Harry quoted back.

“Are you saying that you don’t have a soul?”

“I lost it years ago.” Harry turned and walked out of the room, never looking back.



Title: The Spinner’s Mix: Lost Souls
Author: [livejournal.com profile] wook77
Wordcount: 527
Pairing: Harry/Draco, Harry/Stranger
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Summary: Harry comes home to his lover after a night spent at The Spinner’s Mix.
A/N: for [livejournal.com profile] dream_wia_dream’s prompt “Why won't you love me, For who I am, Where I am, He said: 'Cause that's not the way the world is baby This is how I love you, baby. The arc of a love affair, Waiting to be restored, You take two bodies and you twirl them into one, Their hearts and their bones, And they won't come undone”. Set in the same universe as “How nice a dame”.



When Harry got home after his night at the Spinner’s Mix, the house was dark. Sighing, Harry undid his belt as he made his way to the bedroom. Pulling it loose, Harry quickly undid his trousers and kicked them off. As he entered the bathroom, scratching at a dried spot of come on his stomach, Harry flipped the light switch as he shut the door.

After a quick shower, Harry pulled on some pants and crawled into bed. His lover’s back was turned towards him. When Harry wrapped himself around him, his lover pulled free and shifted further to the far edge. Harry edged over until his lover’s voice stopped him.

“Don’t.” The command was angry.

“Fine.” Harry snipped before he turned his back. Harry had no idea how long they lay awake, backs turned, a few inches apart physically but miles apart emotionally. Finally, sleep claimed him.

When Harry awoke, his lover lay reaching towards him. Slowly, so as not to wake him, Harry reached his fingers out until they touched, tip to tip. A murmur that he couldn’t understand and his lover shifted closer. Emboldened, Harry brushed his fingers down the palm until they he could grasp the, and he hesitated to use the word, dainty wrist. Just as his fingers closed around it, the former Boy-Who-Lived watched as his lover opened his eyes.

“Where were you last night?” There was no sleep induced hesitation as his lover demanded information.

“The Spinner’s Mix, where I always go.” Disappointed eyes met his.

“Did you fuck someone else last night?” The accusation cut Harry and he reacted angrily.

“Yes, alright?! Is that what you want to hear? Yes, I fucked someone else.” A flinch and Harry regretted his harshness.

“Do you care about me at all?” The sadness in the voice slashed open Harry’s heart.

“Yes.” Harry’s adamant vow was soft.

“I don’t think you do, Harry. Why won't you love me, for who I am, where I am?” Still clutching at the slight wrist in his hand, Harry’s heart began to race.

“That’s not the way the world is. This is how I love you.” A blink and his lover disappeared and a hard stranger took his place.

“Who did you fuck last night?” The cold demand had a tone Harry hadn’t heard since his days in Hogwarts. It opened up a chasm greater than the few inches separating them

“I didn’t see him.”

“Don’t mince words, Harry.” The sneer on the face made Harry flinch. “Was it good? Was it good enough to ruin everything?” Harry couldn’t maintain eye contact.

“It was… it wasn’t anything like what we have.” A rough tug and the wrist pulled free of Harry’s grasp.

“You didn’t see him at all?” Harry shook his head. “Not one single feature?” Harry shook his head again before stopping.

“I saw his hair. The light reflected off it before he shut the door. I remember because it was blond and blond has always been my favorite because of you, Draco.” A disparaging snort answered him.

“Flattery will not help you, Harry.” Watching as his lover rolled out of bed and quickly dressed, Harry’s heart leapt to his throat.

“You were right last night, you know. You really don’t have a soul, Harry.” A crack of Apparation and Draco disappeared.


Before anyone asks, the answer is “No, I shan’t continue this. I like where it ended.”



Title: Hammock
Author: [livejournal.com profile] wook77
Wordcount: 575
Pairing: H/D
Summary: Harry gets creative in the yard after seeing Snape and Draco together.
A/N: for [livejournal.com profile] albichorizon’s prompt of “H/D - sex in a rope hammock”. Also, apologies for the shitty summary, I just couldn’t think of one.



The day had been long and tedious. Harry was glad to be home. After spending too many hours shoving the piles of paperwork on his desk around, all Harry wanted was a cold drink and a nap. Hearing voices from the back of the house, he knew that his chance at a nap disappeared.

He quickly threaded his way through the house until he saw Draco sitting in the backyard, entertaining his least favorite person in the world. A sneer lit Professor Snape’s lips as he saw Harry.

“How nice of you to finally join us, Potter. Hard day doing nothing, I presume?” Instantly, Harry felt eleven again.

“It was quite unproductive, thank you for asking.” Harry smiled as he walked past the derisive professor and leaned in to kiss Draco on the lips.

“I’m quite sure.” Harry turned once more to address Snape.

“Are you staying for dinner, then, Professor?” Still using a polite conversational tone, Harry fervently wished that Snape had other things to do. He didn’t quite care what those things were, he just wanted Snape gone.

“Alas, Potter, I am unable to join you, Remus is waiting.” Harry did his best to suppress the shudder that wanted to course through his system at the mental picture.

“Tell Remus I said hello, then.” Harry kissed Draco on the cheek before making his way across the yard to the hammock. A blissful sigh left his lips as he rolled into it and crossed his arms over his eyes. Voices continued to murmur across the yard as he drifted to sleep.

“That was quite rude, you realize.” Harry’s smile answered for him as he felt Draco’s presence next to him. “Severus is a friend.” Letting a rude snort answer for him, Harry tugged at Draco until they were both reclining on the hammock.

“Mmm, this is nice. Let’s stay here all night, yeah?” Harry wrapped his arms around Draco, pulling them together until Draco lay on top of Harry.

“You’ll get rope marks on your back, Harry.”

“That’s ok with me.” They stayed silent until Harry spoke Draco’s name.

“Yes, Harry?” Draco propped his chin on Harry’s chest. The pressure was comforting.

“Let’s shag.”

“How romantic, Potter.” When Harry didn’t laugh with him, Draco quieted. “You mean right here and now?”

“Yeah, right here and now, Draco.” Harry reached up and toyed with Draco’s buttons.

“We’ll fall out.”

“Not if we’re careful.” Shirt undone, Harry pushed it off his lover’s shoulders and tweaked a nipple. At the slight moan, Harry lifted his head until he could nip the other nipple.

“What’s gotten into you, Harry?” It sounded like a rhetorical question to Harry so he didn’t answer. Instead, he latched his lips onto Draco’s as he undid both sets of trousers. The answering moan increased Harry’s arousal and soon, he had both cocks in his hands. The friction was unbelievable, even after all these years. When Draco’s hand joined his, Harry knew he wasn’t going to last long.

When Draco bit Harry’s neck, Harry came with a hoarse shout. A triumphant look on Draco’s face and Harry thrust his softening cock into Draco’s groin. With the increased pressure, Draco came as well.

“Told you we wouldn’t fall out.” Harry muttered as Draco collapsed onto him.

“Mmm, far be it for me to argue with the Boy Wonder.” The rope swing continued to rock as the lovers lay, sticky and replete in the setting sun.



Title: Fantasy Come True
Author: [livejournal.com profile] wook77
Wordcount: 558
Pairing: H/D
Summary: Draco awakes in the morning to realize his fantasy really did come true last night.
A/N: for [livejournal.com profile] nightmarephase’s prompt of “H/D – ‘I never thought you one for a bathroom full of duckies.’ ‘What were you expecting? A cave with skulls and a toilet?’”



The night had been hot and sexy and wonderful. It was nice waking up next to someone, even if that someone was currently snoring loudly in his ear. Shifting, Draco pressed back against the body curled around his. His morning erection hardened when the hand pinched one of his nipples. Opening his eyes, Draco watched the tanned and scarred hand drift lazily up and down his chest.

At the sight of the hand, memories came flooding back. His partner was none other than the Golden Boy himself, the Boy-Who-Lived-To-Become-The-Man-That-Vanquished-He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named. A silly grin passed across his face before he squelched it. His fantasy, played out in so many ways throughout his Sixth Year, while on the run and through the years of the war, had become reality.

And what a reality it was, he thought to himself before capturing the hand as it delved further down his body. Draco could feel Harry lipping at the back of his neck, through his hair. The smile, this time a bit more serious, reappeared.

“Mmm, morning.” Harry mumbled as he shifted towards Draco’s shoulder.

“Good morning.” Draco’s voice was slightly formal and he wasn’t sure what to say or how to say it. They’d been enemies and reluctant allies for far too long. Last night might have been a mistake, after all. Hormones getting the best of them after sharing a drink at the pub or it could have been the drink, although Draco didn’t remember drinking all that much. He certainly didn’t feel the effects of too much drink.

“You’re thinking too hard.” Another mumble whispered across his collarbone as Harry shifted closer.

“It is a natural function, Potter.”

“Not at this hour of the morning and it’s Harry.” A small nip at the juncture of neck and shoulder and Draco bit back a moan.

“What’s Harry?” Draco was losing the ability to think as Harry moved their entwined hands onto Draco’s prick.

“My name, prat.” This time, as the hands grasped his cock and rubbed the head, Draco couldn’t help the moan as it burst out of his lips.

“I knew tha..AT. Oh god, don’t stop.” Harry’s erection pressed into Draco’s cleft as Harry pressed their bodies so close that they melded together. Rocking back and forth, the new lovers were slow to find the rhythm but once they reached it, it didn’t take long for them to climax.

“That’s a nice way to wake up, Draco.” His name on Harry’s lips sounded right and that scared Draco for a second. Thoughts of his father and his mother raced through his brain before he remembered that neither could care, the first due to his death and the second due to her incarceration and subsequent insanity.

“Toilet?” Draco gestured blindly behind them as he thought about what his parents would have said had this occurred earlier.

“Right, thanks.” His back chilled and matched the coldness of his thoughts. He heard the door open and then laughter.

Rolling over and leaving his thoughts behind, Draco called out, “What’s so funny?”

“I never thought you one for a bathroom full of duckies.”

“‘What were you expecting? A cave with skulls and a toilet?” Harry popped his head out of the bathroom and grinned. Draco grinned back. His worries about his parents were left on the bed as he crossed the room to Harry.



Title: Unknown Fantasy Comes True
Author: [livejournal.com profile] wook77
Wordcount: 760
Rating: R to NC-17
Pairing: H/D
Summary: Draco’s misbehaved and Harry teaches him a lesson.
Warnings: Contains spanking
A/N: for [livejournal.com profile] maddykitty’s prompt of “H/D - bottom!Draco, light spanking, established relationship” - I’m seeing it as a continuation of the pair in “Fantasy Come True”



They’d moved three times in the past four years. Every time they found a comfortable spot, the press would find them and Harry would insist that they find anther home. Each and every time they moved Harry would insist that the bathroom be filled with duckies and Draco would smile.

In the six years they’d dated, Harry had constantly teased Draco for his obsession with the cute rubber duckies. It brought back memories of their first night together and the next morning. That wasn’t to say that the relationship was always steady and wonderful. Instead, it was filled with arguments and hot make-up sex followed by more arguments and even more hot make-up sex.

This time, however, Draco thought he might have gone too far. As Harry’s face darkened, Draco just knew he’d pushed Harry beyond the breaking point. Self-preservation kicked in and Draco turned and sprinted towards the bedroom and his wand. The thudding of feet told him Harry was close behind, too close as Harry had always run faster than he.

Slamming the door and then leaning against it, his eyes racked the room, searching frantically for his wand. When he found it, his hopes for avoiding punishment disappeared because it was completely across the room. The door slammed and Draco pushed back. Harry kept throwing his weight against the door and random bits of curse words popped through every time the door bounced a bit open.

Finally, the door burst open. Draco flew across the room. Turning quickly, he held his hands straight out in front of him.

“I didn’t mean it.” The dark look on Harry’s face didn’t bode well and Draco frenetically hunted for something else to placate his lover.

“Oh really? Malfoy, you know I’m not going to let it pass.” Draco was both apprehensive and intrigued by what Harry would come up with to punish him. There had been the corset, the dress, the high heels, the everlasting erection and the ties. This time, Draco knew he’d gone beyond any punishment that would be pleasurable to him.

“Now, Harry, it’s not as bad as it seems.” Harry shook his head and crooked a finger towards Draco. When he shook his head negatively, Harry crooked his finger again.

“Get over here, Malfoy.” Slowly dragging his feet across the bleached hardwood floors, Draco finally stood in front of Harry. “Strip.” Obeying, Draco took off his trousers and shirt. “Pants as well.” Draco shucked his pants and waited, his prick bobbing.

When Harry sat, Draco’s prick gave a leap as Harry eyed it. A sigh slipped past his lips as Harry ignored his cock. Instead, Harry tugged Draco until he was facedown on Harry’s lap. A resounding slap sounded through the air, followed by pain from his arse.

“What the fuck do you think, OW, goddamn it, Potter! Are you spanking me?!” After each of his outbursts, Draco’s arse sent another wave of pain up his spine from the smacking of Harry’s hand against his arse.

“You…” A crack and Draco knew his arse would be flaming red by this point.

“Are…” Another crack and Draco’s cock twitched.

“Never…” Another and Draco could feel the dampening of Harry’s trousers where Draco’s cock leaked against them.

“Doing…” A moan after the next spank and Draco’s face heated.

“That…” Oh Sweet God Above, he pled as Harry’s hand connected.

“Again! Am I understood?” Draco buried his face against the scratchy wool of Harry’s trousers, trying to hide the blush and the heat of arousal against them.

“Yes.” Draco’s response was blurred by the fabric and the leg he pushed against.

“What was that? I couldn’t hear you.” Harry’s voice was taunting and Draco knew it.

“Yes!” He shouted as he pulled his face away from the leg.

“Yes, what?” His cock twitched again as Harry’s voice switched to a forceful purr.

“Yes, Master!” When Harry’s hands rubbed and soothed his arse, Draco could swear that his cock was doing the Mambo as it danced against the wool, scratchy and encouraging.

“Very good, Draco. Come here and give me a kiss, yeah? You know I hate punishing you.” Draco stood up before settling his sore bum in Harry’s lap, legs wrapped wantonly around Harry and the chair.

“I think you get off on it.” To prove his point, Draco pushed down against Harry’s erection.

“I think you get off on it.” Proving his point, Harry gripped Draco’s prick and gave a rough tug. With a shout, Draco erupted across both of them.

“That I do, Harry, that I do.”



Finally, I have 9 original prompts (2 are SW, 1 is G/L and the rest is H/D) to go and 3 secondary prompts. Nothing promised on the 3 secondary (meaning the prompter gave me my choice between 2).

Date: 2005-11-20 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yodels.livejournal.com
I love that you've left much of the backstory in many of them up for interpretation by the reader. Adds an interesting sense of disorientation, as if I don't really know what's going on.

Date: 2005-11-21 12:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
That's what I was going for, actually. I like that feeling of not knowing what's going on. I like the brief glimpses into their worlds.

I'm glad you enjoyed them!

Date: 2005-11-21 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aprilstarchild.livejournal.com
That last one is just silly. I had a hard time not giggling. I'd love to see backstory for it.

Date: 2005-11-21 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed! I keep saying to myself that I'll continue this one or that one and I start them and then get pulled onto another project. I have about 15 started right now. This one is on my list but I make no promises.

Thanks for commenting!!!

Date: 2005-11-21 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] star-dancer54.livejournal.com
*glares* OY! Are you calling ME a poser?? *bristles*

*goes to read fics* *mutters curses over the first two* *snerks at Hammock* *snickers over the last ones*

Date: 2005-11-21 12:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
err, no, no I'm not... I'm calling myself a poser as I proclaimed quite loudly that I would never do a songfic and here it is, my songfic.

I'm sorry that the first two made you curse, happy that Hammock made you laugh and ecstatic that the last two made you snicker.

Your comments always brighten my day (even for such a poser as I)

Date: 2005-11-21 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] star-dancer54.livejournal.com
*eyes suspiciously* Ah. *fur settles* Well, there really isn't anything wrong with them, really...

*nuzzles* Not a poser, just odd... :D

Date: 2005-11-21 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
nope, nothing wrong with them... I just never thought I'd write one. (I admit that I'm a songfic snob). I enjoy a songfic when the lyrics aren't half or even a quarter of the story. From what I'm remembering, you haven't done that...

I didn't mean to offend... I just didn't think I'd ever write one. I'm poking fun at myself, honest. We cool?

Odd? Me? Thanks for the compliment!

Date: 2005-12-08 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] star-dancer54.livejournal.com
*snickers* Alright then... :D Well, I've done it on occasion, but only if they're supposed to be vidfics. Otherwise, I try to have more plot and less song... :/

lol We coo'. No prob

lol You're welcome!

(Icon LUV- Dead Like Me kicks ARSE!)

Date: 2005-11-21 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snottygrrl.livejournal.com
nicely done sweety. you are courageous to keep going on these! i don't think i'd have the stamina.

made good (though slightly risky (and riské!)) lunchtime reading. ♥

Date: 2005-11-21 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're enjoying them. I've noticed a few people on my lj keep saying how nobody is putting out any good H/D and I've been writing these so that's made me nervous about the writing like I haven't been since the beginning.

I only have a few more to write, then I have my [livejournal.com profile] slashfest entries, my [livejournal.com profile] big_bang_hd entry, Voice in the Dark and a new story bumbling around in my head that'll be AU and won't be posted until it's completed (in nice weekly installments). I keep getting the feeling I volunteered for a bit too much...

Date: 2005-12-07 09:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snottygrrl.livejournal.com
i think folk are refering to longer pieces. 'sides, folk are always saying that because they join the fandom, have a whole archive of stuff to read and then catch up to now and don't have easy access to all the good writing because folk haven't made list of the new stuff.

your writing is certainly up to snuff.

good luck on all the fic.

Date: 2005-11-21 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tropical-rhythm.livejournal.com
I really liked these, and you left a lot of it open to interpretation, which can be a very good thing. Keep 'em guessing.

"What were you expecting? A cave with skulls and a toilet?"
-lol. Goth!Draco, replete with claw-footed bathtub. Pity I don't write fic, that might be a good one. Duckie!Draco was adorable, though. And, the spanking!!
...Not that that's a kink of mine. *coughs* No siree...

I did a double take when I saw all that wookiee fic on my f-list... then realised that it was x-posted. I was all, WTF? It's all good, though.

Date: 2005-11-21 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're enjoying. I like the snippets in their lives alot as well. It lets the reader get creative.

I loved that line when it was given as a prompt. Totally made me giggle.

I say go for the Goth!Draco... give it a try!

Spanking would be one of my newest kinks. It was fun to write it.

Yeah, I posted it to the groups that I asked for prompts from... figured I'd let people know that I'm still continuing these and haven't forgotten them. I know they're taking forever to finish up. I see the train at the end of the tunnel ;)

Date: 2005-11-21 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] original-lie.livejournal.com
Oh you do so rock. Um I really liked the first 2, there's just something about them. Kinda hard to explain but they just draw me in and covert me. Hammock had a sweetness to it that was almost illicit, but of course very enjoyable. ;) Oh duckies! I knew Draco was a softie deep down LOL. I love, love, love it. Fantasy Come True is so cool *grin* I like it so much. And the subsequent sequel - oh so naughty *snirts*. Now that was hot.

Date: 2005-11-21 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked the first two. I know people are going to be all WTF?! at the not continuing but I really liked how it didn't end happy. Not every relationship can end happy (see rant (http://www.livejournal.com/users/wook77/20581.html#cutid1) about RL.)

I loved the duckie prompt but it took me a bit to figure out how I wanted to use it. Hammock was meant to be a bit soft as well. Not overly fluffy, just a brief glimpse into their established relationship. I'm glad you liked the fantasy ones!

I adore the *snirt*ing... I thought I was the only one who did that! *SQUEE* for *snirt*ing. Spanking is hot and will always get my approval.

Date: 2005-11-21 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Spinner's Mix...I am miffed that you intend to leave us hanging on these, but I won't pester. *clenches teeth, smiles sweetly*

Hammock...Sweet and enjoyable. Next time, write actual sex in the hammock okay? Oh, and have them tumble out at the end! *grins devilishly*

Fantasies...I got a laugh out of the duckies and Draco's 'what did you expect?' line. I'd like to know what Draco did to deserve a spanking in the second half though. *wonders*

All in all, an awesome job. I doubt I could do this, with such varied prompts, so I commend you! *applauds*

Date: 2005-11-21 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
apologizes for the dental work needed due to clenched teeth...I just wanted to show that sometimes, things don't work out in the end. If you'd like to write a follow-up, I'd be honored ;)

*giggles* at falling out of the hammock. Hey, it was kinda sex...

I'm glad the duckies made you laugh. I could just picture Harry's face going WTF?! The prompt was brilliant! As for the spanking, whatever you'd like it to be, of course.

I'm glad you're enjoying... as I remarked above, I'm reached the *wibbly* stage about these. I've seen more than a few comments on my flist about how there isn't any good H/D being put out right now and I've written 25-ish H/D stories in the past two weeks. The first couple, I brushed off but then it kept happening so I've gotten a bit *wibbly* about my skills like I haven't been since my first post. So, basically, thanks for letting me know you're enjoying...you've helped buck me up and keep me going.

Date: 2005-11-21 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oboros.livejournal.com
Before anyone asks, the answer is “No, I shan’t continue this. I like where it ended.”

me too, actually. Go Draco!

Love the rest too.

Date: 2005-11-21 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it! I just couldn't write a happy ending at the time and the more I think about it, the more I like where it ended. Sometimes, things just don't work out.

Thanks for reading and commenting! You've made my day!

Date: 2005-11-21 10:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nightmarephase.livejournal.com
yay! I've been waiting for my prompt to come up, and I wasn't disappointed. thanks!

Date: 2005-11-21 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm glad you thought it worth waiting for! It was quite a bit of fun to write!

Date: 2005-11-21 11:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lusiology.livejournal.com
Fifty points to Slytherin for keeping your prompts series going with such diverse and interesting ficlets.

Spinner's Mix - I can't help feeling Oh Harry, what have you done you silly man, yet I understand why perfectly. I'm certain that Harry would come out of the war touched in some way by darkness. Great description of the club and I'm glad to see that Draco's still got some pride. :)

I liked all the others too. I think they did very well not to fall out of the hammock. The waking up scene in Fantasy Come True was just lovely. It made me feel like grabbing hubby and going back to bed for a snuggle. I would love to know what Draco did to make Harry so cross that he got spanked. It's funny how we all have our varied kinks. Spanking is not really my thing in fics, bondage on the other hand... *smirks*

ps I loved seeing Guys & Dolls. The cast was amazing.

Date: 2005-11-21 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're enjoying. I've been a bit worried as I've seen so many people on my flist saying that there wasn't any good H/D out there and I've pumped out so many stories lately. That had me *wibbly*, I'll admit. One or two and I could ignore, 6 on a 40 person flist is a bit less ignorable.

I'm glad you enjoyed what I did with your prompt. I know that wasn't what you really wanted when you prompted but that's what came... the description of the club was actually written for another story I canned but knew I could use some of the stuff (damn George and Lee anyway for not liking what I was doing with them).

The waking scene was one of my favorite to write. I like that softness of the morning...

Haven't seen Guys & Dolls, but I hear it's amazing. I'll have to rent it or something.

Date: 2005-11-21 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lusiology.livejournal.com
there wasn't any good H/D out there

It's probably the lack of new, completed multi-chaptered fics that they mean and not WIP's or one shots.

I know that wasn't what you really wanted

I'm a hopeless romantic and adore happy endings. That doesn't mean I don't like fics that pull at the heart - which I did. Anyway, there are countless fics where the boys meet at a club & have a happy relationship.

Date: 2005-11-22 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
Hopefully... it's hard not to take it personally but I figure, I'm not specifically hearing how my stuff sucks so I'll go with the flow. (then again, maybe people are saying that and I'm just not privy to it ;) )

I really really wanted to write a dancing/grinding fic for you but it ended up sounding cheesey and lame so I canned it.

I love a happy ending as well but this one just wouldn't give itself one without sounding cliched and lame. (can you tell I hate to be lame? *snirt*)

Date: 2005-11-21 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hdforever.livejournal.com
http://tw.pg.photos.yahoo.com/ph/vicki780214/detail?.dir=b058&.dnm=10bascd.jpg&.src=ph

erm.... about the rubber ducky.....XD

Date: 2005-11-21 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
er, um, yeah, um, hmmmm...

Date: 2005-11-21 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dream-wia-dream.livejournal.com
Oh.
Wow.
Such lovely, lovely angst. I loved both of the Spinner's Mix fics. But the one you did from my prompt was just so heartwrenchingly beautiful. And I'm so glad you left it at that. That is the perfect end to the story.
I will go back and read the rest of the fics later. But for right now, I have to stop @ the end of the Spinner's mix because it's just so perfect.
I know I haven't been able to sufficiently explain how much I loved what you wrote. I'll come back when I'm more coherent. ;)

Date: 2005-11-21 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked what I did with your prompt. I have to admit, choosing to leave the story where I did, I thought to myself, "they're going to hate me". I just couldn't see a happy ending.

You've made my day. You've really really made my day and re-charged my self-esteem.

Date: 2005-11-21 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dream-wia-dream.livejournal.com
I sooo wanted just pure angst. I love it when I actually get something that's not a happy ending. And it was developed so well. Just can't stop gushing. Anyone who "hates you" for the sad ending, I'll thump 'em. *lays thumping stick across lap*
I also came back and read the other prompts you wrote as well. I love Hammock 'cause I adore hammocksex. it's not always easy, but it's entertaining :) And the last two...with the duckies! Just makes me want to cuddle Draco. MorningAfter!Draco was so adorably fretting. And Draco spanking? Unghh...um, yeah...tasty.
So, I guess I'm not really any more coherent this time. Just...I love what you've written. Glad that I could cheer you, 'cause you definitely gave me just what I was looking for :)

Date: 2005-11-21 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I wasn't sure if the ?stranger? from How nice a dame really came through in the second part. I didn't want to make it glaringly obvious with big neon signs and stuff (I figure me writing it was enough of a hint ;) )

Thanks for the threats... I'll point 'em your way.

I'm glad you came back and read the others and even happier that you enjoyed them! I'd love to spank cuddle Draco as well.

Date: 2005-11-21 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bonfoi.livejournal.com
I like the slice of life style of writing...it's just a glimpse, but, it gives us food for thought!

Wonderful way to work out the mental kinks! Thanks for having such fun with the prompts!

Date: 2005-11-21 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'd love to flesh out some of these eventually.

Your prompt response is written, I'm just finishing up one more and then posting 4 at one time.

Date: 2005-11-22 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kabal42.livejournal.com
I only had time to read the last two (and I will shamelessly admit that I chose those because 1) the last one had spanking & 2) they were connected).
They were well written and my spanking-kink made the last one quite, erm, intersting... *G* And I'm sitting at the University, so I really shouldn't be doing this. Reading fic and squirming about it, that is.

I'm impressed at how much you've written lately and regretful of how little I've had time to read. Hopefully I'll have more time soon!

Date: 2005-11-22 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wook77.livejournal.com
*giggles* I adore spanking as well so it was way fun to write.

I'm glad you've enjoyed them so far! It's been a challenge and I've actually dropped RL stuff to keep writing on these. I see the train at the end of the tunnel!

Take your time, hopefully you'll enjoy them! *looks over [livejournal.com profile] kabale's shoulder and waves at the guy staring over her shoulder...

Date: 2005-11-22 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kabal42.livejournal.com
I'm sure I will enjoy what I read :-)
Now I hope that more time to read will also mean time to write. I miss writing and I'm caught with both writer's block and no time to ponder writing.
(Tonight I managed to write half a page or so, it's the first in about a month...)

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