I don't think anyone but a few people on my flist know how much I needed to read a story like this yesterday and GAH, you provided it. The flailing isn't because of that need but because of the story itself.
Like I said, I'm mildly embarrassed over the long rambling comment as I normally attempt to be more coherent than that (or at least remember how to spell). I do know it's intimacy and not intimicy, I promise.
To show you that I can be coherent (and, ok, it took 5 readthroughs) -
It was concise and told just enough. What it didn't say or have the characters say is even more to me. The way you showed their feelings through their actions and the way they treated each other, that gripped my heart and brain and then made me fall in love with you.
I have no idea who you are but, like I said, if I don't already read your works, please prepare to be stalked. I can find letters of reference from current stalkees that show that I'm not creepy (I hope...).
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Date: 2006-12-23 04:03 pm (UTC)Like I said, I'm mildly embarrassed over the long rambling comment as I normally attempt to be more coherent than that (or at least remember how to spell). I do know it's intimacy and not intimicy, I promise.
To show you that I can be coherent (and, ok, it took 5 readthroughs) -
It was concise and told just enough. What it didn't say or have the characters say is even more to me. The way you showed their feelings through their actions and the way they treated each other, that gripped my heart and brain and then made me fall in love with you.
I have no idea who you are but, like I said, if I don't already read your works, please prepare to be stalked. I can find letters of reference from current stalkees that show that I'm not creepy (I hope...).