*hides due to extreme shyness and such* So I just got into reading your stuff after working my way though like everything else on the web and let me say it is all lovely and this story is extra wonderful. I love your Seamus and his struggles and I kinda hope things only get worse so I can read more. Errr one question though: "The pain hadn't weakened; he'd failed, allowed his partner, his best friend, his lover, die." Should that be "to die"? Maybe I just don't understand your sentence structure since no one else commented on it, but I thought I would ask.
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Date: 2009-04-29 06:02 am (UTC)So I just got into reading your stuff after working my way though like everything else on the web and let me say it is all lovely and this story is extra wonderful. I love your Seamus and his struggles and I kinda hope things only get worse so I can read more.
Errr one question though:
"The pain hadn't weakened; he'd failed, allowed his partner, his best friend, his lover, die."
Should that be "to die"? Maybe I just don't understand your sentence structure since no one else commented on it, but I thought I would ask.