I'm glad you finished this so I could finally read it! I went through it in one sitting and enjoyed every word. You're so good at building tension and capturing real arguments between real people -- I thought the fic developed in a very believable way. I enjoyed all the secondary characters as well, and will definitely look forward to seeing what happens to Dennis. I'd also be curious to see Lavender find someone who accepts her scars (although did you write that already? *mind is fuzzy*). Thanks for a lovely read. :-)
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Date: 2008-09-06 03:36 am (UTC)