Thanks so much! I've found that I keep focusing on color or scent in quite a few of my stories for some reason. I love how a color immediately garners a response (I say grey, I immediately thing drab and boring, that sort of thing).
I have to admit re: the sex. At one point, I was so afraid that they just wouldn't shag and as it's for daily_deviant, they really had to. So, I wibbled about whether or not it would fit in the story so you've reassured me about that :D:D:D. So double thanks on that!
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Date: 2007-12-05 06:14 am (UTC)I have to admit re: the sex. At one point, I was so afraid that they just wouldn't shag and as it's for daily_deviant, they really had to. So, I wibbled about whether or not it would fit in the story so you've reassured me about that :D:D:D. So double thanks on that!
I'm very glad that you enjoyed this! Thank you for commenting!