*blush* I'm so glad you like it! I wanted the flashbacks to kind of just pop in there. I wanted it to be a bit realistic to what Harry was experiencing. I know when I'm driving and I have a memory pop into my head, everything else fades. I shouldn't say this but even the road fades a bit and the memory comes to the forefront. Then the memory fades and I'm back to driving.
*double blush* I did the beta work myself. I've had problems with beta's in the past and since I beta other people's work, I do my own too. I just have to sit back and read it out loud and it seems to work for the spelling/grammar things.
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Re: Awesome Beginning
Date: 2005-08-12 03:34 pm (UTC)*double blush* I did the beta work myself. I've had problems with beta's in the past and since I beta other people's work, I do my own too. I just have to sit back and read it out loud and it seems to work for the spelling/grammar things.