ext_29516 ([identity profile] demilo19.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wook77 2011-04-12 11:46 pm (UTC)

Sang Min's motivations allude me and Steve's babble is made of adorable. Poor Danny having to deal with that (heh). One of the details I loved was Chin and Kono's reaction to Kamekona giving ice away. Excellent way to illustrate the stress Danny was under without telling everyone he felt stress.

And Steve's talking to rocks and teaching Grace? that was brilliant.

This was a great fic. I would love to see the conversation though.

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