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scarfman ([personal profile] scarfman) wrote in [personal profile] wook77 2009-05-18 03:10 pm (UTC)

  • You've got the character voices down.
  • I really don't believe anyone in-text thinks of him as "Spock Prime". Well, thinks maybe, but when a writer uses the phrase, especially in dialog, it takes me right out of the story.
  • The pegboard image was brilliant, as was Kirk's rebuttal when McCoy brought it up.

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