Uh. Wow. That was mind-numbingly hot. *speechless*

Um, well that aside, I love the bit about Parvati's dancing and Lavender's scar. These lines were wonderful: "She thinks it's ugly most of the time, makes sure that she doesn't wear clothing that could show it and you try to subvert that by buying her clothes that show it off. It's a mark of courage, a show that she faced a demon and won."

Anyways. You are made of win.